This week I improved "The Test of Man" and "From Hell’s Ditch" on suras 76 and 85 respectively. Stronger 22>76 and a possible 41>76. New 15>85 and ironic 67>85. "What Waits Beside These Roads" introduces a possible ironic 85>34.
Also there was some very clumsy language in "Gaia’s Burdens Exposed" which needed fixing.
The main improvement was to "Defending Jesus" on sura 43. This had gotten unwieldy - and unfortunately had taken aboard some mistakes (tho' nonfatal). I have a better handle on how it organised itself, and I tracked down Josef Horovitz's primary on its Yemen episode. I also caught some 40/43 parallels, indicating 43>40.
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